Saturday, 29 September 2012

Song Analysis

Me and Lauren wanted to make sure we knew what we were going to film for each lyric, therefore we printed the lyrics to the song and analysed it how we would film it. As well as writing what shots were going to be done we sorted the timings to give us a guide on how long the shots should be. Doing this helped filming because it means it was easier to understand how we was going to organise the shots with the song.




Author: Kiran Paul and Lauren Mcmanus

Friday, 28 September 2012

New Production Schedule

The production schedule has changed slightly because we changed our initial idea for the opening. The ideas of each section are still similar for example we was going to have a happy scene as she was thinking about the time they went to a cafe. However this has changed to them filming themselves having fun. We changed this as it made the shot more fun and a moment she would want to remember.


When will you film? Time, date etc.
Where will you first? Locating and setting.
Who will you film? Actors required.
Who will you film? Which aspects/ scenes of your storyboard will you film?
How will you film? What camera angle, shot sequences framing do you require.
Equipment that you will require including video equipment costumes and props.
Friday 28th September
1:20pm
Passage way near the Lady Bridge
Grace Clark and Harry Yendell
Start of the video; walking away down pathway, sits on bench and imagines Harry. He disappears when goes to touch him.
Pans
MLS
OSS
POV
Zoom in and outs
Match on action
Camera
Headphones
Black clothing & dark makeup.
Friday 5th October
3:20pm
Castle Grounds
Grace Clark & Harry Yendell
Happy flashback when in park area, taking video of each other.
POV
Hand held
Camera
Tripod
Girly clothes
Monday 8th
October
4:00pm
Lauren’s sister home- moving in, needs redecorating.
Grace Clark
Photoshoot- Front, back cover and magazine image.
Camera
Black dress
Leather jacket
Heals
Ripped tights
Black jeans
Vest
Dark makeup
Heavy jewellery
Thursday 11th October
11:20am
Lauren's second sisters home.
Bedroom and Bathroom
Grace Clark
Grace singing whole song.
Kills herself in bath- drowns.
Zoom in and out
Pans
Tilts
High angle
CU
MLS
Camera
Tripod
Frame with picture
Black clothing & dark makeup.
Jumper- Crying.
Friday 12th October
1:20pm
 Lauren's second sisters home.
Bedroom.
Grace Clark and Harry Yedell
Argument flashback 
 Zoom in and out
MLS
Two shot
Shot reverse shot
Pans
High and low angle 
Dark clothing different to other shots because flashback
Camera
Tripod
Tuesday 16th October
6:30pm
Castle Grounds Bandstand
Grace Clark and Harry Yendell
Romantic dance
360 Turn
High angle
Stills
Pans
Close ups
Zoom out

Casual, dressy clothes.
Camera
Tripod
Tea light candles


KEY
POV- Point of View
CU- Close Up
ECU- Extreme Close Up
ELS- Extreme Long Shot
OSS- Over the shoulder shot
MLS- Medium Long Shot


Author: Kiran Paul and Lauren Mcmanus

Diary Entry: 28th September

Today me and Lauren went to film the opening of the product after school. We originally was going to film at The Lady Bridge in town however once we arrived with our main girl for the production another idea sparked. We felt the location was too busy and is a long walk to the restaurant, instead there was a lane next to the bridge which was intimate but had a nice scenery for the walk as it overlooked a lake, we both felt this location would be more appropriate  At this location the protagonist had to walk down the lane and sit on the bench. To do this we used a dolly to track the walk so it flowed well and we would edit the shots to make the walking faster and not long winded. 

We then came up with the idea to have her sit and imagine her lover was beside her. This was done by showing her sitting on her own and  turning to see no-one next to her then as she turns again he is there but disappears as her hand caresses his imaginary figure. A range of shots would be used at this bit which include a shot reverse shot, over the shoulder, and a range of framing's. A shot reverse shot would be used between the two however the images would be superimposed so that the main guy; Harry would dissapear from the shot implying to the audience that he is not really there. Due to this change we quickly informed our antagonist and asked if he could join us today to film, thankfully he agreed and met us soon as possible to shoot the areas that he was in. 

This shooting was done several times in order to have enough footage to edit from. Below is an image of our main protagonist infront of the set that is being used for the opening.

Author: Kiran Paul

Wednesday, 26 September 2012

Filming Locations

The start of the music video with the bench was locatede on the right- the pathway overlooking the river. Near the Lady Bridge.


Castle grounds where the happy flashback is located.

Tamworth Castle Grounds Bandstand where the evening dance and happy romance memories is located. The bandstand was lit with candles.

This is the location where the argument between the protagonist and antagonist takes place as well as the suicide event.  This place was chosen because it is accessible and it has the perfect space to film the two scenes.

Author: Kiran Paul

Monday, 24 September 2012

Diary Entry: 24th September

In today's lesson we created a production schedule for our filming. Me and Lauren discussed our shots we would need to do and if any combined together. We then went to meet our main artist who would be in the video and discussed the days she and us were free to film. From the brief meeting we started to draw up a schedule which included the days, time, who, where, props and shots that would be needed for the video. The production table is shown in the post below.

After this we then started to talk about ideas for the back cover for the cd cover. We have thought to have another image of Grace but with the text to the side of her.

Author: Kiran Paul

Thursday, 20 September 2012

Diary Entry: 20th September

In today's lesson I continued to analyse cd covers, finishing The Pretty Reckless album as well as comparing this album to another of a different genre; Beyonce album which is a pop/ RNB genre. I discussed the appearance of each album then talked about the similarities and differences.

After doing this me and Lauren started to sketch and discuss some ideas for our cd cover but following the codes and conventions of  a grunge genre album as well as the artists' style of album design. Below is an image of the album text that would be placed on the cd cover once the main image is on.

Author: Kiran Paul

CD Cover Analysis

I have decided to analyse some album covers of the artist I have chosen as well as other genres to show the difference between the covers and this will help me to decide what design I would like to do for my own cover.



This is one of the album covers for The Pretty Reckless. It was released in 2010 by Interscope Records. This album does not have a sub title, the only text it has is the band's name and EP which means extended play.

The text on the cover is all white of a bold but gothic font, this suggests that it was done to match the style of music. The bands name is center aligned, between the artists heads and on the door to stand out but is done so that the main image still stand out. This text has been used on all of their album covers which establishes the band and makes it easy to recognise the artist. By creating a music video for this artist we would have to use the same writing so all the albums as well as the one we will create will look consistent. EP at the bottom of the cover is also in the same font colour however a lot smaller and hidden as it is not important.

The main image is in a black and white effect of three men and one woman this implies that they are the members of the band. This effect was done to match its setting, it looks like downtown New York in a rough area where this type of music would be played due to the social class. The positioning of the artists are standing and sitting around the steps which show their slackness and in a way show power by the positioning as it looks intimidating. Their facial expressions are very serious which connotates their meaning behind the songs, the songs are quite depressing and talk about situations which only a certain social group face regularly such as abuse, drugs and death. Perhaps that is why the colouring of the album is black and white because the audience of this music believe they live in a boring world which is dark and dull for them.
The clothing of the artists is also very dark and consists of monochrome colours, all three of the men are dressed in black, whereas the girl is dressed in white with hints of black. This makes her stand out due to being pale skinned, bright haired and dressed in clothes which are also bright. This may be done to be visually appealing to boys and girls.

The image to the left is the back cover of The Pretty Reckless album Light Up ( the album that we will be recreating).

Traditionally on a back cover there is the track list with the barcodes and other information not a main image. However as the time has gone on an images on the back cover is used as well as the front.

Due to The Pretty Reckless being a band the back image is of them; three boys and the main singer Taylor in the middle.  This could suggest domination in this group or the protectivness over the female singer. 

All the band members are dressed in monochrome colours with the female singer wearing white, which makes her stand out from the others. This could have been done on purpose to attract the male target audience as they are more likely to purchase something if there is a female advertised on it.

The colouring of the tracklist is in a red bold colour and a Times Roman font which makes it very difficult to read. It is good to have it at the top of the album because the image then stands out however it is not seperated  which makes it harder for the audience who buy the cd.

The barcode is always located on the bottom right as it is code and convention of cd covers, therefore to make ours look realistic we will place a fake barcode in the position. Around the barcode and bottom off the cover is information about the record label, image, date and studio logo etc. We will also include this into our cover.



In comparison, this is an album cover for the pop/ RNB genre, this is the most recent album cover from Beyonce, created in 2011 by Parkwood Columbia. The album is called '4' this is because it is her fourth studio album and it is her favourite number.
The text on this cover is plain black thin text with the same font and colour used for the subtitle which is located at the bottom of the cover. The size of the text is quite large and stands out but does not over power the image. The text is behind the image but the text is still visible and because of being such a well know artist the image is recognizable without the  text. The number 4 is positioned to the bottom right corner but is large enough to read and understand that it is the album title. 

The image is of the female artist in a medium shot so it is a clear image of what she looks like but does not show the entire body. The image is enlarged so that it covers the middle of the cd cover. The background of the image is a pale yellow so that the black text stands out as well as the image. 

The artist is dressed in just a fur coat, with no under layers, this may be slightly raunchy for a cd case however everything is covered and being such a popular celebrity this image will not effect the sales. Her makeup is very dark and accessories very Caribbean/ African/ tribe style this may be  done to fit with the latest trends or to fit with the meanings of her songs.

Both covers are very effective for the genre they are representing, although they are different genres they follow some of the same codes and conventions of a cd cover.  The titles are both large and bold, and positioned in the center of the case, the album title is located at the bottom of the cover however they are opposite sites. As well as the images is fit to the case so the whole case is covered. The differences between the two is the colours used. The first image uses dark colours to represent the darkness of the songs and genre they sing whereas the Beyonce album is brighter and stands out, the colours used may imply the album track list is fun and the meanings are not depressing.


This is the back cover of the Beyonce album.

It is obvious that the same design is used for the back as it was used for the front. The artist name for the front is used exactly the same however the main image is slightly different.  At the front of the cover the female artist was facing towards us however on the back it is showing her back. This suggests that it is done so that the front shows the front and back shows the back.

The colour scheme is similar and the clothing is still fitting with the tribal theme.

The tracklist is written in black which is clearly visible and is positioned to the right on the clear background so that the image is not overiding the text like the other cover (The Pretty Reckless). 

The barcode as well is positioned to the right at the bottom therefore it is not a genre move, it happens for all cd covers.

The similarities between the two are the both are dressed in short outfits which show a lot of flesh this could have been done to appeal to the audience and make it stand out on the shop shelves. Moreover both covers have a barcode in the right bottom corner, studio logo and all the other information. This may be because of it being a code and convention. The differences is the font colour and style and the image colour. The Beyonce cd is bright in terms of colours used whereas The Pretty Reckless album is very black and white. Therefore when we recreate this we would have to take into consideration the black and white colours used.
 
After analysing both covers, I have developed knowledge of how different genres portray their music through the cd covers. As we are doing a grunge song by the artists of album one we would need to follow these codes and conventions in order to make the album fit with others of this genre. 


Author: Kiran Paul

Wednesday, 19 September 2012

Diary Entry: 19th September

During today's lesson we added some more ideas to the production. In certain scenes we wanted the clothing style of the actors to change depending on the mood of the flashback. Many music videos consist of many different outfits to make the video visually appealing and not boring and to seem repetitive. Therefore we decided that when the flashbacks were happy moments the protagonist would wear brighter colours and more prettier clothing pieces such as floaty dresses however when the two characters are arguing and she is depressed and sad she would dress in dark clothing because stereotypically these colours are associated with the emotion. The antagonist would wear clothing of the same style and colour as he feels the same throughout, however it will be different clothing so that it does not look like the same time, it shows the difference in time and place.

After discussing this I then started to analyse The Pretty Reckless- EP album which I will then complete next lesson.

Author: Kiran Paul

Monday, 17 September 2012

Diary Entry: 17th September

In today's lesson, me and Lauren wanted to cast our actors and actresses for the music video. We first wanted to have a vision of what our characters would look like. Therefore we used the avatar creator to get a design the look we wanted, we went for a blonde, pale skinned teenage girl and a boy with dark brown hair who was taller than the girl to stereotypically implying that he is older. Once we had the designs for the protagonist and antagonist we then discussed the potential people who could play the role. We asked friends and people who studying drama as a discipline at school if they would take part and found two actors; Harry Yedell and Grace Clark whom were willing and looked the part. Both have experience with acting and one another due to being in productions together before.

Once choosing our actors, we then looked at The Pretty Reckless previous albums and EP covers. We found that all the albums and fan made ones consisted of the same font and colouring, therefore if we were to make a album cover we would have to use a similar font and colour scheme to fit with the others created.

Author: Kiran Paul

Casting

For our music video we need only two actors; a young female and male. They are in a relationship therefore do not need to have a similar look. However when we were searching for our casts, we wanted people who would fit the genre of the music, for example somebody whom does not look prim and proper.

Female protagonist: Grace Clark
This person is most suitable for the female protagonist because she has experience in the acting discipline, due to being in school productions. Her appearance also relates to the song artist; Taylor Momsen because of the blonde hair and innocent natural look but her dark style which makes her perfect for the role. She is faired skinned and has light hair which will stand out against the dark clothing and music scene. We felt she could play both the happy and sad character due to her diverse look.


Male antagonist: Harry Yendell
This person has been chosen for the male role of the music video because of also having experience. Harry is a student currently studying drama, therefore he knows how to act natural and can help to give us tips about the directing which will be very beneficial to us as it will make the video more professional. As well as doing college productions he has worked along side our female protagonist which will make the chemistry of the video more realistic as they know one another. His looks are also suitable to this music genre as he portrays himself as the grungy type, who would date a girl like Grace.




Author: Kiran Paul
Images: Kiran Paul and Lauren Mcmanus

Monday, 10 September 2012

Diary Entry: 6th September

After watching examples of music videos including Bob Marley- 'Don't Worry', Amerie- 'One thing' and State of Mind, me and Lauren discussed that we should improve our music video so it seems more professional. We sat and discussed what improvements could be made, spoke in full about each shot and came up with new ideas for the title ending.

Once the video has finished we wanted to have a studio logo at the end to make the production more professional. We came up with ideas and designs however the idea has yet to be finalised. This logo will also be inside the cd cover, mainly on the back page, to show the establishment.

Author: Kiran Paul


Analysis of Example Music Videos

Today, we looked at three music videos in detail and discussed as a class the strengths, weaknesses, things to do and what not to do. Watching the example work was to help influence us and inform the class what to do and what not to do. From watching the exemplar videos we rated the product and it helped us know what to do in order to get the best grade. Once we had watched the videos it was clear that we needed to look over our storyboard and make sure we knew what we were doing in every shot.

Amerie- One thing

The first music video discussed was Amerie- One thing. It is song in the a RNB genre and we overall marked it as a level 2 because it had some good features however there were many aspects that did not follow the codes and conventions and did not use enough features . There was a range of locations used however the video was poorly executed with no synchronisation and no flow between shots.


Strengths:

  • Some words anchorage with the actions
  • Range of locations
  • Unsteady camera
  • Titles were not professional and not presented as if it was broadcasted on tv.
  • No synchronicity within the actions or in sync with lyrics.
  • Poor choreography
  • No Flow- there was a pause in the video as the main performer was confused what her next step was.
  • Off Frame
  • Inappropriate costume
  • Titles smaller and located in bottom left
  • New actress
  • Channel logo
  • Clearer shots
  • Bookend
  • Needs to be visually appealing
  • No titles so would not be able to recognise song
  • No relevance of words and shots
  • Boring
  • The shots were very long roughly 8 seconds when should only be 5 max
  • 8 shots used repeatedly
  • 3 locations- 2 in the same place
  • Have titles
  • Text anchorage with shots
  • Effects
  • Perhaps someone singing
  • Different locations
  • Main singer not to have confidence
  • Be a boring video

Weaknesses:
Things to do:
Bob Marley- Don't Worry

This video was scored the lowest out of the three at a level one. This was marked harshly because it had not obeyed the codes or conventions of a music video and used the same eight shots repeatedly. As well as this many of the shots had no reference to the lyrics.

Strengths:
There was not many positive points within this music video, except for one anchorage of the image of ducks when the lyrics says ducks.

Weaknesses:

Things to do:
Things not to do:
State of Mind-

After looking at the OCR examples of music videos we were then shown a video on Youtube, of a music video created by university students. This was rewarded the highest level 4, due to its skills in the shots, idea and effects. This one was a lot different to the others we had seen because everything flowed, words matched shots and it was cleverly choreographed. This video gave us inspiration to make our music video the same level of quality.





Author: Kiran Paul