Music Video Feedback

As we completed the music video we wanted to get feedback from the class peers to see what they thought about our production. The students watched the production then filled out a review sheet which allowed us to gather the information and create this table. The overall results are shown below.

As you can see there are no 3,4, or 5's in the ratings section which shows the project seems very successful in terms of what the students thought. The first column is the student that responded to the questions. The second is how imaginative and creative the overall production was, our responses for this were exceptional as they all said high imagination and creative flare which me and Lauren were beyond happy with. The next five columns was a rating of certain aspects; one being the best and 5 being poor, thankfully we only got 1's and 2's. There was not many improvements to the product because of such positive feedback, some individuals such as 1 and 8 said  there should be more clips of Grace singing and she should sing earlier. Me and Lauren agreed with the improvements however felt the storyline needed to be set before she could start to sing. The print artifacts were also a big hit with the testers  as they said they looked of a high quality, looked good as it was not images used from the video and there was a lot of creative thinking in this.


Author: Kiran Paul and Lauren Mcmanus

Print Artifact: Magazine Advert

 

This is the final magazine advert for the CD cover. It was mentioned previously in the blog that the final advert was created however from the feedback and our own opinions, me and Lauren were not sure about it. We felt the image should be made large scale to a background and the features on top. All the other features stayed the same however moved to be better positioned on the page. We were told last time that the review font needed to be more edgier as it's from Kerrang. Therefore the font was made more bolder but plain, this same font was also used for the price to keep it consistent.

When doing this print artifact we were not sure which image looked better for the advert. The image accidentally printed flip-horizontally so the image was on the other side. We showed sir and he preferred it, so we decided to print both and ask the class for their views. When doing this today they all agreed that the edited image looked better, as the image was facing the same way as the text and album cover so it was easier to read/ see. We therefore edited this as made it as the final print artifact. 










Author: Kiran Paul and Lauren Mcmanus

Diary Entry: 12th December

In today's lesson we finished our magazine advert. After printing this last lesson we noticed a couple of errors, so we started the lesson by editing these errors and changed the price font as we felt the size as it did not look right. We printed this and we presented it to other teachers for their opinion. One of the teachers stated some improvements for the advert which we also agreed on. She said that the review quote by Kerrang should be a better edgier and harder as it is a rock conglomerate, at the moment it is quite soft. Another thing she said was some of the text and images needed to be sized done as they over powered the page. We decided to amend this once the production finished.

The next thing that was done was the editing of the production. We decided to edit the walking scene at the end so that it was razored and it would jump to different positions of the walk. As the camera was not still the shots looked odd so we added film dissolves to make the shots flow more however because of the shaky camera the transitions are out of place, but me and Lauren felt it worked well and looked good so we kept it as it added to the effect. As the shots were shorted and some deleted there was empty space at the end so we decided to jump to the singing scene of Grace, however her smiling then looking away to show closure. A dip to black was used to end the production.

Once finishing the effects we added the music logo and the titles. When watching the music video we felt MTV rocks or Kerrang may have been too rocky for this particular music video. 'You' is the softest rock song of The Pretty Reckless as it is soft grunge and about love so we felt it did not fit with the codes and conventions of a hard rock music video usually shown on those music channels. Instead we felt 4 music would be more suitable as it displays a variety of music of different genres and the music video fits with the typical suitable codes. Therefore we browsed the web to find the 4 music logo and got rid of the background on Microsoft Word so that it would be transparent on the video. We imported it, re-sized and positioned it and we felt it looked very well done.

We then added titles. After watching music videos on this channel at home I identified some certain codes and conventions of this channel. The text is situated to the right, the font colour is white and it is in order of Artist, Song and album. We therefore did this also making the font look plain and similar to the one of the channel so that it would look more like a video on this channel. We did not have enough time to add the effects of this text so left it until tomorrows lesson. 


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Diary Entry: 10th December

Today me and Lauren wanted to make sure our magazine advert was completed and to continue editing our music video.

We started the lesson by finishing the magazine advert, all that was needed to be done was the review quote and the price. However when printing our last version we noticed that it did not print the background colour of black although the printing options were suitably changed. So instead we came up with a new idea today of drawing a black box at the bottom and made all the features in front of the box. Doing this meant the advert kept its format but printed properly. Another feature that was added was the review from Kerrang. We wanted to get a proper  review of the album so decided to browse the web to see what different media institutions stated about the album. Once doing this we inserted the quote and rating stars into our advert. We presented the advert to our teacher and we all agreed on there was a gap at the bottom which looked bare. Lauren then came up with the idea to have a smartphone barcode reader which if scanned it would take the buyer to the pretty reckless website. This is excellent as it shows our technical skills and we did this by finding a website online which was free and easy to input the url and it would create the square code itself. We put this at the bottom in the gap to ensure the page was full but not overcrowded. Another thing we did was get rid of the itunes logo as it is not the codes and conventions to have the hmv and apple logo together. 

Moreover once finishing this print artifact we then edited our footage, whilst I was editing the print artifact Lauren added some effects to the production such as feather background to make some of the shots look properly like a flashback. We then edited the last walking shot by changing the brightness and contrast as before it looked dirty and made the filming quality look poor. By doing this it made it look a lot better.  We then showed sir he complimented the footage but said the ending would be better if the speed was not changed but it was razored and jumps to different places on the walk.  We started to do this however did not finish so will continue next lesson. 

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Diary Entry: 3rd December

 In today's lesson we viewed the footage that was filmed in Thursday's lesson. We were thankful that the footage was in the correct format so it was not as blurry like last time. The shots we used were a forward track, panning around Grace and then a still frame showing Grace walking off. In lesson we chose our favourite clip and then inserted into the project.

We edited majority of the shots, changing the brightness and contrast and amended all of our flashbacks so that they looked more like the past. We did this by making the image grainier and blurry to emphasise the shots were in the past. Moreover we edited the ending shot of Grace walking away by razor 4 aspects of the clip and changing the speed and duration of certain shots, we did this so it jumped Grcae walking will looked very effective.

Video transitions between shots were also added to keep the shots flowing, a cube spin was done between the start of the walking and the singing of 'lalala'. This was done as we did not want all the ending to be Grace walking so to change it we decided to alter it so it was some walking, singing then finishes with the walking and then a fade to black.

Next lesson we need to finish adding effects and touch up on our print artifacts and then present them to the class to see their opinion of the print documents to change any documents.  

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Diary Entry: 29th November

Today, we went filming instead of our lesson today. We wanted to re-shoot the walking scene as the last shots were not in the correct format therefore were not clear.

We did the re-shooting in the same place near the bridge and we were happy when the set changed slightly due to the weather as it emphasised it was not the same time or place, implying it is the end of the song. We also changed the shot so it would be a forward track then pan around Grace to a behind shot to see her walking off.  This worked well however was a bit shaky as it was cold and the camera was hand held. A dolly was not used as on our first shooting at this location the floor was rough and it would not be as practical so instead we decided to hand hold it and slowly and steadily take the shot. We will not know if this way works until uploading the footage.

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CD Album Images

Print Artifact: CD Album

The image above is the outside of the album cover as well as one side of the inside cover. We have stayed with the theme of black and white as we believed it looked very effective and went well with the grunge theme. Something we were keen to stay by. The image on the right is an image that will be in the opening of the case and we have altered the brightness and contrast to be the same as the others as we wanted to stay with the theme. 

The middle image is the back cover. The barcode is located in the bottom right corner as followed by the codes and conventions and the record label and other label icons are displayed above the text which is found on every album cover. The song titles are displayed on the right and the last few go on top of the main image however it looks realistic and normal for an album cover to do. The four x's have been used on every album of The Pretty Reckless so to follow the same theme we decided to used them on the back cover. We did this in a chalk font to look bold against the back cover.    

 This image is the front cover. We kept it simple as we wanted the image to be the main focus. Most front covers have a title and just the image as it needs to appeal to the customers. We did not brainstorm front covers ideas because as soon as we took this photo we knew we wanted this as the front cover as it had a wide background for the title to be written and it looks like a cover picture. The ash tray and cigarettes fitted well with this as we wanted it to imply the album name- Light me up. We felt this connection had a link and worked well.

The three images above is the inside cover for the album. 

 This image is the inside main cover and will cover up one side of the album. We have typed the band name  and drew a heart to emphaise the personal feel of the album. This feature has been done in many album covers of all genres as it depends on the individual's perspective. The brightness and contrast has also been altered to 81% and 88% to get the sharp white background and the darkness of the Grace's outline.

 The middle image is a collage of pictures of Grace at different shots and candids. We wanted a personal feel so placed fun images that were taken during the photo-shoot and filming. We did not want serious ones as we felt it would not be as fun and would not add to the personal feel.











This image is the final image of the inside cover, it is also black and white and the brightness and contrast was changed to look consistent. The same four x's as used on the back cover we also used in this bit however the font has changed to a marker pen to imply it was done by Grace. This logo is their signature icon and is used on all the advertisements so we felt if we incorporated it into the inside cover as well as back it would promote them.

Author: Kiran Paul and Lauren Mcmanus

Diary Entry: 28th November

Today in our media lesson we looked at the printed version of the inside album cover, we realised that we did not like the position of the images and there was not enough in the collage. So instead we changed it so that there was only one image on both sides and a mixture in the middle. We also changed the colours of the two large images (right and left) to a sharper white and black effect. This was done by making both images black and white and the brightness to 81% and contrast to 88%. Doing this meant a washed out but bold image is presented instead of having two images of different colours.  

Once doing this we then edited the main center image by re-arranging the image position to make it more appealing. In one of the corners of three images the corner points did not fit well so we decided to write a signature to add to the personal touch. As we already added text in a marker pen we chose to used this font and size to write her name. We found difficulty to do it free hand do we decided to type it and rotate it to a slant to make it look more realistic.

When trying to drawn the signature we got Grace herself to do it as we wanted it to be her actual signature and we found it difficult to do it ourselves. Once realising none of us could do this we chose to type it in this font to make it consistent and look better. We also showed Grace our production so far, she was very impressed and said it looked effective and professional. Moreover we showed her our four ideas of the magazine cover and asked her which her favourite was, she agreed with us and liked the first one as it look effective and like a magazine cover. Sir was also asked this question and he agreed with this design he said the others looked frigid and the setting was not as effective. Me and Lauren therefore chose the first design as our firm but felt we may need to edit the colour of the image to make it stand our and look more bold.

Author: Kiran Paul

Diary Entry: 26th November

I had an idea over the weekend which inspired me to edit our inside of the album cover. I got the idea from the Emile Sande album in which inside there is a collage of images and I thought it would work very well for our album as we had so many images from the photo shoot which had not have been used but were of a high quality and would look good as a collage. I texted Lauren this idea and she was thrilled about it.

Therefore in today's lesson we decided to edit the inside cover, we thought it would be more difficult to get the images to look like a collage however it worked well, we reformed to shape making it different sizes, changed the contrast and brightness to make the images look unique but still all fit the black and white theme. We decided to still have the original text on the cover as it looked good and follows codes and conventions of some inside covers. In the end we put a large image on both sides of the cover and the collage in the middle frame. However one of the image had too much bare space on the left of it so instead we cropped this image and placed three black and white images in a column next to it so it looked more full. 


As we did not want too many images that looked the same we decide to find a background on Google that would fill the gaps. We found this one to the left. It is a grungy background that fits well with the other images and we made this arrange to back so that it would act like a background and be hidden among the other images. 

Once finishing this we were pleased with the design and would print it next lesson to see how it looks printed, however we did identify that we may need more images to make it look better.

Author: Kiran Paul

Diary Entry: 22nd November

In today's lesson, we showed our filming production to our teacher and he mentioned some feedback that we could take on board when we next update the filming. Once showing our project we decided to make the scene where the couple are filming themselves more realistic. We did this by un-focusing the start and end of the filming so it implies that they are trying to adjust the camera, however once focused the shot was sharp and looked quick and did not flow. Instead we added a film dissolve to make the shot go from unfocused to focused.

Once doing this we then tried to edit one of the shots by get rid of two lines in the background however this proved difficulty as the shot moved so the lines moved in the wrong place. Instead we decided to razor the image and change the lines as the image moved.

Once completing some edits on the video footage we decided to continue editing our print artifacts. The artifact we decided to edit was the inside cover of the CD album. We wanted the album to seem personal and in some albums there are doodles in the inside cover therefore as we had empty spaces around the image we chose to draw around the image. This was done by using the pen and changing the effect to a smudge marker to make it look like a marker pen, we started to draw a signature, love hearts, three x's and typed up the pretty reckless and made it slanted to make it look real.     

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Diary Entry: 19th November

Finishing off from last lesson we continued to edit our magazine advert. Sir showed us printed HMV game, music and film adverts within magazines so we could see how they organise their layout and design the page.

We then chose four potential images for the cover and opening a word document we inserted the image. Arranging the image on the page in Mac Photoshop became a nuisance as the image would not move to one side and would not crop properly, instead we decided to amend the document in word on the school computers using the Microsoft software. This was easier as the image moved and we were are familiar with this software. 

Once making sure the word document was A4 size we changed the background to black, inserted our main image and sized it correctly. We then added all the features such as the HMV dog logo, the text, terms and conditions

In another window we opened the logos and edited them so the background was transparent. Having edited the minor aspects we opened the A4 word document, changed the colour of the background to black and added all the features such as the HMV dog logo, text, CD, album cover and text including the terms and conditions. 

We chose to create four designs and ask others which they think is the best for a magazine advert. However the price has not be placed as we were only focusing on the design and layout, then the price will be inserted after. 

The first idea was our favourite because of the setting and position, we love how the props such as the crate and jumper added to the grunge theme and fits well with the album cover. We felt the position of the text worked well with the image and just looked like a magazine advert. Another thing we liked about this image was that Grace looks at the camera so she is interacting with the audience. 

The image to the right is the second option. This position is Grace looking over her shoulder towards the camera. We liked this image because of the interaction however felt the body position was a little awkward. The magazine features also stayed in the same position as it is conventional for HMV to have the their logo to the right and album cover to the left.

The third design is good because it only takes up half of the page however one of the heals are cut off in this image which makes the main image look slightly weird. Due to this it does not look professional as we have not paid attention to detail. This is my least favourite shot. 

Finally this image is the last option. This is the same image as the first option however is in a different framing. I like this framing because again it is interacting with the audience, her actions imply her casual and 'doesn't care' vibe which adds to the grunge appeal. The titles at the bottom are the same as the previous 3. 

















Author: Kiran Paul

Diary Entry: 15th November

At the start of the lesson a small amendment was made to the back cover. The credits were needed on the back to make it look much more professional therefore we viewed existing CD covers to view what it said, once seeing this we typed up the credits on our cover and made the font size small to fit on to the cover.

As the template was a tri-fold we decided to have images within the case. We wanted different poses to make the case more interesting, as well as we decided to have the images as different colours to contrast against one another. The middle image inside was a blue tinted image and on both sides we chose to have black and white images to fit with the back and front of the cover. We liked the black and white effect as it added to the grunge look we wanted to go for.

The album cover was done so we then started our magazine advert for the 10 mins remaining, as this was not completed we will finish it next lesson.

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Diary Entry: 14th November

As last lesson we created the back image, today we chose to create the front of the CD cover. We had already found the actual text of the band so inserting this was very simple, but before importing we had to make the image transparent so there would be no white background or outline around the text, this was done on Fireworks. The image chosen for this cover was Grace dabbing the cigarette hinting at the album name- light me up. We wanted a dark image where she would be the focus, although there is empty space on the right she is the main focus of the cover. The album title was created on Photoshop as it was just text. This colour and font was used as it stood out and the orange colour implied light/ fire which also links to the cigarettes. We felt linking the image and text would make the image have a relevance and effectiveness.

When both the front and back covers were completed we imported it to the tri-fold CD template. Although importing it did not alter the image to fit to scale so we had to do it manually by making it fit a 12cm by 12cm square. This task proved difficulty as the images were overlapping and the quality of the image changed as it was transformed in size. Instead a lot of the unnecessary parts had to be cropped to ensure the image did not  lose its high quality and good size. This process was very time consuming however as we got used to it, the process got a lot quicker.

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Diary Entry: 12th November

As we have no more footage to edit we decided to start our print artifacts so that we could organise our time properly. We decided we would focus on the back cover of the CD in today's lesson. Thankfully the photo shoot was done near the start of the production so we did not have the worry of filming as well as getting images for the album covers.

To start the back cover we chose our image very carefully however since the photo shoot we had the perfect image for the back and we were happy that the image came out clearly and was very effective. Originally the image was colour however Lauren felt it would look better if the image was black and white, doing this made the image better but I suggested to change the contrast and brightness so the face and entire image was white and the black eyes stood out. This image looked extremely effective but was more visually appealing when the text was placed on. The titles used the font- courier and coloured in black to contrast against the white background. A bar-code and logo of the record label was also imported so the CD cover would respect the codes and conventions. However one unconventional thing that was done was not having the song times next to the song titles. We felt this did not look appealing and it was not a major concern as most CD cases do not state the times on the back cover.  

To import the Interscope records label was a struggle due to the outline being white and as our main image background was a faded white we had t edit the image in fireworks. This still proved to be a problem as the shades changed depending on the position. To solve this we used the ink generator and clicked the area nearest to the text and then used a paintbrush to go around the lining of the text. In the end this worked and was not noticeable.






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Diary Entry: 8th November

In today's lesson me and Lauren started straight away to edit the footage. We needed to upload the footage of the re-walk to put at the end however when trying to import we realised that the footage was of a different format and made the footage look blurred and unstable. We could not have used this footage as it would look completely different and unprofessional compared to the rest of the video, therefore we decided to re-film as we wanted the entire footage to be of a high quality.

The crying footage on the other hand was not blurred or an odd colour therefore the footage could be used. We firstly enlarged the image so it was zoomed into the eye only where the tear drop falls, we also made the speed of this drop very slow to exaggerate and add to the video effect. A lot of editing was done to this shot as the original colour was faded and made Grace's skin look infected. We disorted the image and changed the colours, however this made the image look worse by turning her older and with bad skin. Finding a suitable effect was stressful so we decided to leave it and come back to it when we had edited other areas.

As most of our footage could not be used we decided to edit more of the footage we already have. An idea we had was to  use a magnification effect when Grace was singing. This effect would make Grace Bigger and be in faint wash out colour to either the right or left of her. We originally wanted this to be on both sides but found it difficult to do because it mirrored the main shot of grace and converted the two images into one which looked very weird and alien like. We found this funny but was not fond of it for our work.


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Diary Entry: 7th November

In today's filming session me, Lauren and our main actress Grace revisited our first location; the pathway near the bridge as well as filming the close up of the tea drop. Firstly we put dark eye makeup on grace and tried to make Grace cry, doing this was very difficult as Grace could physically not cry. After this we went to the pathway to film the walking scene. We made Grace wear different clothes to show a change in time and the weather helped with this as there was more autumn leaves. Me and Lauren wanted different shots to be done from the start walk as we did not want it to look similar, therefore we wanted a forward and reverse track to make the music video diverse. A dolly was not used because the floor surface was very rough and it made the camera very shaky. Therefore we decided to walk and hold the camera instead.

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Diary Entry: 5th November

After returning from the holidays me and Lauren got straight into editing our project. We watched the video again and decided that the bath scene at the end was not very effective and was not working with the rest of the video footage. In the bath scene there was green paint on the wall which was not supposed to be there and because it was highly visible we felt it would not be appropriate for a music video. Therefore we decided to film an alternative ending where Grace would revisit the bench but walk past smiling and singing showing the end of their relationship.

Once deciding this, we felt that the footage that we had needed more effects. On one of the shots of grace singing we put a magnify effect. This placed a bigger image of her on the left as well as the original image and looked very effective because of originally changing the colour and contrast to make the image look washed out and white. This was only done to one of the shots because we wanted each singing part to look different. Another effect that was placed in the shots was a blur on the edges of the frame. This effect was used on the romantic sitting down scene and worked very well because of the camera technique and video effect. As the camera zoomed out the candle lit tea lights appeared through the blurred frame which added romance to the shot. Another video effect used was during the argument scene. The colour of the room was quite bright and did not fit with the lyrics at this certain point, we therefore made the scene darker to make the lighting stand out. As well as doing this we increased the speed and duration of the shot where Grace throws her pillow to dramatize her anger. Moreover we then edited the REC titles. The text was moved to the left corner and a battery icon was made to make the image of a camera look more realistic. We razored the title shot so that it would repeatedly flash on and off the screen to show it is recording as well as showing the battery decreases by slowly the battery bars disappearing.

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Diary Entry: 18th October

In the first hour of the lesson me and Lauren updated our blogs to ensure all the posts were in the correct place and the best it could be to make sure we got a high level. We added more images and edited posts so they flowed and made sense.

After doing this we then showed sir our music video production so far. We were extremely delighted when he told us we were currently on a level 4 and we produced on of the best shots of having someone appear then disappear on a bench. Knowing that our hard work was paying off we great to hear and continued to make us work harder.

Once tidying our blogs up we then edited the footage that we had filmed the previous filming session and started to edit last lesson. We changed the speed/duration of some of the shots including when Harry leaves the room after an argument, this storming out bit was supposed to be quite quick and dramatic. Therefore  we increased the speed and cut the ending so we would only see him leave the room and it would not continue to see him shut the door.

By not having long of the lesson we then started to amend the suicide bath scene.

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Diary Entry: 17th October

In todays lesson we continued to edit our music video. Today was very time consuming as we had to view 2 days worth of footage- Fridays and yesterdays.

As soon as the lesson began me and Lauren went straight to upload and import the footage from the past two days, we tried to not waste time as we had a lot to do. Once importing we viewed Friday's footage and discussed which arguing scenes were the best. A problem we face with this was the framing changed for many shots therefore it was hard to use a variety of clips because they did not flow well, therefore a lot of editing was done to ensure the footage looked like one and could easily change from shot to shot.

We firstly edited the shot of Grace singing so one line would be a mid shot high angle and it would quickly cut to a close up of her face still singing. All the singing shots have been manipulated in colour by changing the footage to black and white and altering the brightness and contrast; by making the brightness higher and contrast darker so that we would get a white background type with Grace standing out.

After doing this we edited Fridays footage of the argument, we created a match on action of the two arguing as well as putting shots together to get shots from different angles and positions of the room.

Having only 10 minutes left of the lesson me and Lauren edited the footage of the dance/ romance scene on the bandstand. We placed this footage over the lyrics 'love, love, love, love' as we felt it was symbolic to the footage as well as the happy memories the couple had.

We were pleased with today's progress as we only have half a minute of footage to edit, however it may be time consuming if the ending suicide does not look effective and we may have to re-shoot with our male actor.

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Diary Entry: 16th October

At the end of school, the sixth filming session took place. This session was filmed by the Tamworth Castle Grounds- Bandstand. This was the perfect location because  when it turned twilight and the tea light candles were lit it gave the location a eerie romantic feel. We got this idea from a lot of movies that we had watched such as A Cinderella Story and thought it would be a brilliant way to include it into the music video as a happy flashback. 

Using candles was a health and safety issue because the bandstand was made out of wood. Therefore we had to be very careful that we did not burn anything, as it would be our responsibility and it would add time considerations to the production.

When the outdoor lighting was perfect the candles were lit, we filmed a range of shots of Harry and Grace dancing. Firstly a 360 degree turn was used as a high angle to show the couple cuddling on the bandstand floor, however when viewing the footage we could see the shadow of the camera equipment and therefore stopped this shot as it may not look good once uploaded on to the software. We did not delete this footage though encase we could edit the shots so it would not look obvious.

Another shots that were taken included the couple sitting down and talking/ kissing to show how in love they were as well as them lying on the floor laughing and cuddling. We did this by using extreme close ups, high angles, still shots, pans and tilts.  

Today's filming went better than we expected as the tea lights were visible and we could still see our actors. The shots that were taken were good because there was a range to choose from and all fitted well together. 

Diary Entry: 15th October

In todays lesson we viewed the footage that was filmed last Thursday and Friday. We chose our favourite shots and continued to edit our music video. 

Firstly we viewed the footage of Grace singing and chose our favourite parts, however we had to be careful when choosing the certain bits as it had to be in sync with actual song. We then edited this clip to make the colour look darker and the contrast to be white so that the background could not be seen. This looked very effective because it was very white with the dark image of grace.

After doing this we then edited other shots by putting transitions in such as fade to black to show the flashback is happening.  

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Diary Entry: 12th October

After school the filming for the argument between Grace and Harry took place. This footage was done in the same location as the 11th October.


For this scene me and Lauren visioned a flashback of them arguing which led to her killing herself due to the emotions. However a reason was needed for them arguing we thought of many reasons- one was forcing Grace for intercourse but she rejected him and it leads to an argument. However this idea did not go well between our casts because they felt awkward acting that out.

Therefore another idea was thought of- it was to have a simple idea of cheating. Harry is on his phone ignoring his gilfriend; Grace and she looks at his phone which causes an argument. Due to the anger he leaves and reacts by throwing a pillow at the door and thinking of this flashback causes her emotions to be upset and angry and it leads to her suicide.  Filming this idea was more successful than the other because it looked more like an argument and fitted well with the other footage.

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Diary Entry: 11th October

We arrived at our location about 12:00pm and had about four hours to film two scenes. The filming took place at this house shown on the left.

The first scene that was filmed was the singing of the song. Me and Lauren decided that we wanted our main actress Grace to sing the whole song so that when we are editing and there are gaps for no flashbacks or something happening we wanted her to sing, just like a music video would. Therefore she cuddled herself all upset and singing in the corner of the bedroom. We did this shooting four- five times but at different angles and shots so every time we put this scene in, the shots would not look the same. For this shot she wore grey tights and an oversized grey jumper so that the actions and styling would fit together. 


After filming this shot we then filmed the suicide in the bath. This was a difficult idea because it could either go very well or a disaster therefore we also discussed other alternative endings if this one did not go to plan.  For the suicide scene she wore black leggings and a grey vest, this was done so that she could be easily seen in the bath.      

A problem that we encountered whilst filming was the memory space on the video camera. We found that we had hardly any free space for more filming just before the suicide scene, we therefore started to delete the files that were not needed from our filming. This was a time consuming issue however we was glad we did not film as the water bit would have been tricky to keep re-shooting. 

Apart from this todays shooting went well, we got all the shots we needed and hoped when we edit on Monday the footage will look effective and there will be no need to change the ending.


The picture to the left is a high angle shot that I took. We wanted to film the entire suicide therefore felt if we did a high shot we could see the fall into the bath. 

This image to the right is a close up of the singing. Whilst Grace was singing we wanted a variety of shots at different angles and frames so that when it was used at different bits in the music video it would not look the same.